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Norn’s Dine Prelude - Review

HIC’s Norn's Dine Prelude short story opens up with a cryptic and atmospheric scene, setting the story that plays with themes of fate, destiny, and the lingering mystery of the world. The story begins in a peculiar, almost otherworldly location that straddles the line between light and darkness, offering readers a glimpse into a space that is both present and elusive. It's a perfect introduction to the complexities of this universe, filled with destiny and uncertainty. Let's dive into the Norn’s Dine Prelude.


Norn's Dine Prelude Narrative Draped in Mystery


From the outset, the narrator’s tone in Norn’s Dine Prelude is one of frustration. The first line, "もう本当にうんざりだわ……" ("I’m really sick of this..."), immediately conveys a sense of disillusionment, hinting at dissatisfaction with the state of things. The narrator speaks of not needing a perfect world but merely wishing to witness how "those children" weave their own stories and live their fates. There’s an air of disappointment in the Norn’s Dine Prelude, almost as if the world has failed to live up to its potential. This sets a somber tone for what unfolds as the story progresses.


A Space of Light, Darkness, and Fate


The story’s setting—a space that can take shape and then immediately dissipate—is a fascinating metaphor for the elusive nature of fate. The narrator's presence is also shrouded in vagueness, emphasizing the enigmatic quality of this tale. It becomes clear that this "narrator" is more than a mere observer; they appear to be a divine or mythological being with control over light, destiny, and existence.


The mention of various "lights" that change color in response to the narrator’s words—labeled as "purity," "debauchery," "chivalry," "desire," "heresy," "wisdom," and "bondage"—suggests a complex world governed by multiple forms of fate or aspects of existence. These motifs give readers a sense that every character or soul in Norn’s Dine Prelude is bound by certain traits, yet the story hints at the possibility of breaking free from these constraints. The narrator's frustration at the world's stagnation and their curiosity about these "souls" adds an extra layer of depth to the unfolding narrative.


The Child Without Fate in Norn's Dine Prelude


Norn’s Dine Prelude introduces an intriguing element: a "light" that catches the narrator’s attention, described as a child without a destined fate, "定められし『運命』を持たない『運命の女神』(ノルン)の子よ" ("Child of the Norn, who holds no determined 'fate'"). This child represents something unique and possibly rebellious against the established order of the world. The narrator's discovery of this child sparks both nostalgia and excitement, suggesting a glimmer of hope within the otherwise dismal outlook they have on this world's stagnation.


This "child" in Norn’s Dine Prelude is likened to Pandora's box—a container of endless misfortunes with a sole glimmer of hope residing within. By withholding a predetermined fate from this child, the narrator essentially grants them the ultimate freedom to shape their own story. It's a compelling setup for the conflict between fate and free will, exploring what happens when an individual is unbound by the threads that govern others.


A Somber Glimpse into Destiny


Norn’s Dine Prelude closes with the narrator observing countless images and possibilities within this newly formed space. They remark, "どんな『運命』を選ぼうと、それはあなたの自由。" ("Whatever 'fate' you choose, that is your freedom."). This is a powerful statement that underscores the themes of autonomy, choice, and the burden of freedom. The narrator adopts a somewhat distant role, poised to witness the unfolding of events that this child—symbolizing the world’s last hope—will ultimately choose.


Final Thoughts on Norn's Dine Prelude


HIC's Norn’s Dine Prelude presents readers with a beautifully layered narrative that delves into the heart of fate, destiny, and the struggle for autonomy within a predetermined world. The story’s use of ethereal imagery, the shifting nature of the setting, and the enigmatic narrator’s perspective create a deeply immersive and thought-provoking prelude. There’s an evident yearning in the narrator's words—a mix of bitterness and hope—that drives the narrative forward, leaving readers eager to see how the story of the "child without fate" will unravel.


A screenshot from Norn's Dine featuring a Japanese short story titled 'prequel.' The background has a parchment-like texture, and the text is written in Japanese. The story appears to contain dialogue and narrative, hinting at an engaging tale set in a mysterious world. The overall aesthetic evokes a feeling of ancient or fantasy literature.

Read the full short story over on HIC's official website for Norn's Dine!


Overall, Norn’s Dine Prelude is a fascinating and atmospheric introduction that sets up a world where the lines between destiny and choice blur. It's an invitation to explore the complex interplay between the constraints of fate and the liberating potential of forging one's own path, making it a compelling entry point into the larger story universe HIC is crafting. Want more Norn's Dine content? Check out our other articles right here on Boys Love Universe.


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